Must have’s items for your real estate on-line advertisements
Writing a good ad could mean the difference in your home selling or not…. This is especially true for the “for sale by owner” seller who relies on their own marketing efforts. There are many great homes offered online that lack pizzazz in their ad delivery. Think of your ad as well rounded meal one that includes an appetizer, main course and desert.
Appetizer: Ad Header
Start your ad with a tasty short header that grabs the reader’s attention and wets their appetite. You need to grab the viewer and give them a reason to further peruse your ad then follow it up with a call or appointment.
Start with a compelling heading, something that grabs one of the best features of the home. This could be; the view, an over sized lot, location, price, new kitchen or the number of bedrooms. When writing the header, think of the feature(s) that are the most important to buyers.
“South Chicago, 2 bed condo with amazing lake views”
“Central Memphis colonial on huge lot”
“Phoenix 3 bd cottage, lowest in town”
“Des Moines jewel completely renovated”
Main Course: Ad Body
The body should be the meat and potatoes of your ad. You want to fill up your viewers with just enough information to keep their interest and qualify your property to their needs. Your home may be perfect for someone, but it’s not for everyone. Highlight the obvious. If the buyers reading your ad are looking for a 3 bedroom and yours is only a 2, it just won’t do. Don’t withhold important information such as price, bedrooms, baths, square footage, etc.
A commonly withheld item is the address. Too many on line sellers withhold the address of the property with the hopes that it will entice the buyers to call. This is a faulty strategy…..and what’s the big secret? No one has ever purchased a home and didn’t know where it’s located. So many homes are being offered online, you don’t want the buyers to pass yours up due to your ad being incomplete. Buyers have thousands of homes to sift through; they will pass over the ones with missing details.
Try to personalize your ad body with statements like; “You’ll love the view”, “we will miss the neighborhood”. Go further in describing the item you mention in your header. Your ad body should talk about the other wonderful features of your property. Remember, your goal is to create an emotional response that will cause the reader to contact you for more information or an appointment.
Keep your ad simple and keep the sentences short. Don’t write a book, it won’t get read. Insert “white space” (a blank line) between your short sentences. Descriptions that run on and on in one long paragraph are difficult to read.
Dessert: Pictures and Contact information
Pictures, pictures, pictures and more pictures, …..the “eye candy” of your ad. Don’t place your ad without desert. Every on line publisher allows its customers to submit pictures. Properties without them are overlooked. Everyday more & more free advertising opportunities are presenting themselves to homeowners. Places such as Craistslist.org, Poslets.com and Owners.com all offer free online listings, with free pictures.
If you are still living in the 90’s and don’t own a digital camera, borrow one. Post multiple pictures of the attractive features of your home and the neighborhood. Use at least six pictures. If you can’t find six interesting shots, then include neighborhood qualities like; the nearby lake, a community club house or your neighbors broken-down pickup truck in the yard, (just kidding). Use your imagination.
Make sure you top off your ad with a “cherry”, an effective way for buyers to reach you. If your ad is on Craigslist or somewhere similar, (where your identity and contact information may be withheld) regularly check your email, not just once per week. I’m also firm believer in posting a phone number. Sure, you may get solicitors, but so what, will also get buyers. You are selling one of the largest financial investments of your life, be available to respond to the inquires.
A well put together ad is a real treat and the buyers will gobble it up.
About the Author:
Greg Sullivan is the President of http://www.byownermls.com/, a For Sale By Owner MLS service, the leading real estate search engine of homes for sale by owner, FSBO. For more information, please visit http://www.byownermls.com/.












